Some people think that success in education depends on the teacher,while others believe its the student's attitude that matters.Discuss both views and give your opinion.write no less than 250 words.
Education plays an important role in a life of every individual. While a group of people opines that victory in studies rely on the approach of the student, but the remaining believe it is in the hands of the teacher. In my opinion, I agree that the success definitely depends upon the student’s diligence, however, in some cases teacher also plays an essential role.
To start with, there are various reasons why a student is responsible for their achievement. When somebody wants to achieve high marks, it can be obtained through perseverance irrespective of the school or teaching staff. For example, in India, there are many government school going children who got outstanding scores in the secondary final exam. Also, even in private school if the student does not have fascination towards studies, then it is impossible to succeed in education. Therefore, the compulsion of the student is crucial.
On the other hand, many teachers have lighted lamp in the life of their students. Not only education but also obedience, confidence are some of the necessary characters taught by the tutor. Also when a student is impoverished, there are mentors who spent their own money to satisfy the need of the corresponding youngster. To clarify any kind of questions either personally or in the subject, the first person who comes to the mind of an youth is class master.
To sum up , from my point of view education of the student is admittedly determined by his behavior and mentality. Though, sincere teachers always play an imperative part in the life of every student.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...termined by his behavior and mentality. Though, sincere teachers always play an impera...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion, in some cases, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03802281369 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85532453741 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8178486582 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167737397824 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546096485271 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496052184199 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102592532697 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061196554291 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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