Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.Suggest what you will do later at work if you have to time off.Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:

Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have to time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

I am writing to you about the possibility of taking a fortnight off work in order to complete my Master’s degree in Engineering.

Currently, I am doing Master's degree in advanced analytics which I have almost is going to complete my thesis. I am looking to take off regarding my above-mentioned leave plan in order to complete my pending project works. Now our project also is getting closure to development stage which I do not have a much work. Also, I already shared my knowledge with my colleagues. They can able to handle this project during my absence.

I hope, this project is going to the next phase that we really need advanced analytics due to this my experience which really helps to move our project into good initiation. I hope, you will also very happy with my new skill experience.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
John

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: A_MUCH_NN1[1]
Message: Maybe you should omit the article "a", leaving only 'much'.
Suggestion: much
...o development stage which I do not have a much work. Also, I already shared my knowled...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... happy with my new skill experience. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
^
Line 10, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing from you. Yours faithfully, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83552631579 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8475140419 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1796333167 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132482014787 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638864795425 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506664322486 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665905665908 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490035815081 0.0580467560999 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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