You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.Suggest what you will do later at work if you have to time off.Say

Essay topics:

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:

Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have to time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Dear Kennedy,

I am writing to you about the possibility of taking a fortnight off work in order to complete my Master’s degree in Engineering.

Currently, I am doing Master's degree in advanced analytics which I have almost is going to accomplish my thesis. I am looking to take off regarding my above-mentioned leave plan in order to complete my pending project works. Now our project is getting closure to development stage which I do not have a continues work. Also, already I have shared my knowledge with my team colleagues. Although I am pretty much sure, they can manage easily without any problems. Definitely, I will check my mail every day and if in case require supporting to complete any emergency that I can manage it.

I hope, this project is going to the next phase that we really need advanced analytics due to this my experience which really helps to move our project into good initiation. I hope, you will also very happy with my new skill experience.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
John

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... happy with my new skill experience. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85082872928 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86504443153 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624309392265 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6187464437 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8181818182 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150003924643 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644907229819 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499337005592 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10731369547 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526650467471 0.0580467560999 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.