Some people think that having a set retirement age (eg. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and
recieve a pension at an entire age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which types of workers do you think should benafit from early retirement.
It is irrefutable that retiral age has to be fixed all over the world and then they should be elgible to get pension from the government. Others believe that some occupants only can take rest that whoever working in heavy lift department or difficult places those can only elgible to get pension at the early age . I am of the opinion that this mater should be debated before any conclusion can be drawn.
On the other hand, in this competive world, humanitation are working really rigid in order to make money and settle their life with the family at a proper age so everyone need retirement at the ealrier age. For instance, In India, Central government has fixed the retirment age at 58 and they knows very well about the faculty of how people are working dedicately on their jobs.
Secondly, mostly age between 30 to 50 plethora of people are facing lot of health problems, mental stress due to lack of manage their jobs. Finally, after age of 60 our body will not support our regualar work that we suppose to give some relaxtion to our body in order to this that we can plan retirment accordingly.
On the one hand, not all the people are affecting stress because some of them have very less work and they really don't want to do touch job so they don't care about the pension age and they can work how they want to do it. Some others are really doing very difficult jobs and life threadening jobs, those people who can not work long life and they need immediate retirement at their early stage. For Instnace, stunt masters who can not work at their age after 50 itself and government can provide pension from them at remaining age.
To conclude this, hunmanitation everyone equal and they must treat equally and they need retirement at the early stage. Government should take action and provide pension for all aged people for their entirre remaining age. Pension amobunt who can impose the taxes to all the people and save them for older persons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: know
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, finally, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63037249284 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27909040216 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487106017192 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.5630490317 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.307692308 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258332847456 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109184702011 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469686097822 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162242839854 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464918705819 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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