People no longer use newspaper and television because the internet plays the same role. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The use of technology in our daily lives increases by day, from simple task to complex management system in order to this people are using Internet to improve their knowledge. However, others believe that television and newspaper are continuing on day to day activity for their life. I am of the opinion that this matter should be debated before any conclusion can be drawn.
On the other hand, Internet is taking a big footstep to enter in to everyone life and people are getting flexibility to know their day to day activities. There are plethora of options to explore it in internet to gain our knowledge and whatever they need like other country news or other languages news that they can read it in mobile with the help of internet. For instance, one of the famous articles about Britain people how they used news papers and currently mobile while wait to get train, in 1980, people are waiting for train and most of them bought daily news paper on railway station and they were waiting for train but current scenario, people don't like to buy news paper and they have a smart phone and they like to read it in mobile.
On other flip, in past decades, people were keep waiting in the early morning to get a news paper and especially they know the timings on news in Television in order to this they have utilised on that time to read news paper or watch it on television.both are good sources of information and entertainment too. In fact, it has the most reliable information and most up to date compared to internet. Although it is not handy as the other, people should still use this often. Because one of the advantages of it is to make bond or get together with love ones and family. Very good example is, watching television with parents to finish a long day comparing to internet a person access it alone most of the time.
To conclude this, even though people are using news paper and television, outweighed by Internet because most of them using like a friendly manner and fastest update in 24/7.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...y need like other country news or other languages news that they can read it in mobile wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61944444444 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43126338899 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.5391158042 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.583333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140158344211 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624740127189 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377561315996 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10597231775 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268677092724 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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