Writing task 1 (a letter)
You recently read an advertisement about the equipment that you bought a few days ago. However, the information in the advertisement was wrong. Write a letter to the manufacturer and say
– What was the advertisement you read?
– What information was wrong?
– What should the manufacturer do about this problem?
Dear Mr. Jay,
Manager,
Sisca Home Appliances Ltd.
Greetings for the day.!!
I am Divya Patel, customer of one of your product vaccum cleaner, I am writing this letter to draw your attention regarding the misleading advertisement I have seen in National level newspaper named Daily Updates in today's edition.
I have bought Vaccum clearner from your one of the brand store located in my home town and I am very happy with the features of this product and user manual I got with this product is very helpful and easily guide end users about the functions and safety measures of this handy equipment for household chores. Today's advertising section in Daily update newspaper catches my attention because the details given in the advertisement about your product was not correct, they had published incomplete details of features and safety measures of your product and out of them some of the points reflects that your product is harmful to use. I am personally using your product and very satisfied with it so I thought to inform you about this advertisement because it damaging your brand and market value in front of your prospective customers. I request you to contact the editor of the newspaper and asked them to write a apology statement in their newspaper for putting your reputation on stack and also published new advertisement with proper details and if they fail to do so you can take some legal actions against them.
For your reference, here I have attached a copy of the newspaper advertisement. Hope you will take my letter into consideration.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Kind Regards,
Divya
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 570, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...easures of your product and out of them some of the points reflects that your product is ha...
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Line 8, column 914, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...f the newspaper and asked them to write a apology statement in their newspaper fo...
^
Line 12, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... into consideration. Looking forward to hear from you. Kind Regards, Divya
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 937.175257732 145% => OK
No of words: 273.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99267399267 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69221050882 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545787545788 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 290.88556701 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.998487385 44.8134815571 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.3 76.5299724578 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185365727644 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756916231031 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580438247098 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837231615066 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04870502017 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 8.37731958763 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.