you and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
write a letter to the restaurant manager. in your letter
give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for celebration
say what was good about the food and the service.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to commend you and your staff for the delicious delicacy and the excellent customer service displayed during our visit last week at Jevnik Restaurant.
To start, one of my friend- Jane got a job offer at Shell Nigeria after five years without job and he wanted to celebrate with friends and family. Hence, it was the celebration that warranted our visit on Friday September 20,2018. Before coming, we googled online for different Chinese restaurant and we picked your location because of the perceived availability of continental dishes.
Commendably, I must say, the cuisines looked as good as the pictures we saw on your website. The quantity and quality of food was impressive, everyone was satisfied with what they ordered as the different foods tasted good .Also, the staff were friendly, warm and looked neat .These skills are not common in recent time.
Personally, I would visit your restaurant in the future and would keep recommending the place to friends and family. Kindly keep up the good work, more grease to your elbow.
Yours faithfully,
James Jude
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13259668508 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60680993057 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685082872928 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5487029513 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.222222222 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259540132774 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927054387379 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362115665064 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136486875992 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316770903117 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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