You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-introduce yourself -explain what is wrong with the furni

Dear Mr Smith,

My name is Julia Perez and I am one of your tenants. I am renting the apartment located in 26 Queen Street, London since the last week. The reason of my letter is to complaint about the condition of furniture, because in the advertise all seemed perfect and I am having problems every day.

To begin with, the wardrobes have all the hinges broken and the paint is old and hulled. In the Kitchen the table have a leg broken, because of that it is impossible to eat over it properly. Also, two of the chairs are in bad state, with the cushions rip. Finally, the couch have the fabric in bad condition and patch with old textiles.

I would like to ask for be located in another apartment, since it is uncomfortable to live here. Besides, the pictures of your on-line advertise do not match with the real condition of it. Also, I would like to appeal a full refund compensation as soon in possible. Otherwise, I will sue your company for fraud. I hope we could reach and agreement.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Julia Perez

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Smith, My name is Julia Perez and I am one of y...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... the condition of furniture, because in the advertise all seemed perfect and I am having prob...
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Line 4, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd I am having problems every day. To begin with, the wardrobes have all th...
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Line 6, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ndition and patch with old textiles. I would like to ask for be located in an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, look, so, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64766839378 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46385996402 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60621761658 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7363729103 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189925697209 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053250574344 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472624345436 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977088452026 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204395313838 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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