You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr. Forbes,
I am a daughter of XYZ whom you offered a rental accommodation. Thankyou for allowing us to rent your house on a temporary basis for such a short notice. We appreciate that being an outsider It would have been difficult to make such arrangement. Although, there is situation which is bugging us. I am writing this to bring your attention that the furnished house has some insects which is making my granny uncomfortable.
It was all good at start about the house but on the similar night the bedbugs troubled us overnight. We ignored it for first two days. But now it is now problematic for us to stay on the furniture or wooden planks.
Therefore, I would request you to do pest control or permit us to spray some insect control on them. Also, if you could suggest some other to place as this is a new country for our family and my grandmom is aged.
I would like to hear about your immediate action.
Yours faithfully.
Gilbert
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 41, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'rental accommodation'.
Suggestion: rental accommodation
...I am a daughter of XYZ whom you offered a rental accommodation. Thankyou for allowing us to rent your ...
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Line 2, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...een difficult to make such arrangement. Although, there is situation which is bugging us...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55813953488 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64455009664 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.473423533 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2727272727 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172276397912 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065008986497 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059245583774 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908058516423 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461001436271 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.