You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there.
Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter:
Introduce yourself and your family
Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find
Give your preference for the location of the accommodation
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in purchasing a house and know about the options available to you.
My name is Chirag, and I dwell with my household in India. I have been working as an accountant manager in a leading firm for more than ten years. We are immigrating to Canada next month due to a business requirement and would abide there permanently.
Furthermore, we are looking to buy a villa in Toronto so that we could reside and work comfortably. We would like to acquire an accommodation, which is a three bedroom house with individual washrooms. Moreover, a small garden and swimming pool is a must for us to relax on our weekends.
Additionally, the downtown location would be optimal as commuting to my office would take less time. Besides, I have heard there are several educational institutions, which would be propitious for our children to reach school readily. Therefore, I would request you equip some metro area properties as that is our first choice.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Chirag Bhardwaj
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, look, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97282608696 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93385150286 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679347826087 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0752528391 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159411244322 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561889899426 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559248032375 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824261382279 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493676759057 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.