You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Task: Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know
when you will be arriving and leaving,
What type of rooms you would like
Ask them how much the weekend will cost.
Also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire about the arrangements for my stay with my family at your hotel. I have recently been through your website and I must admit that while checking out the gallery section, I was quite impressed with the sea view from the rooms.
Let me elaborate, I am planning a weekend getaway with my wife and parents from 20th March to 22 March. Therefore, we will check in on 20th March around 9:30 AM to 10:30 AM and as our return flight is scheduled for 22nd March in the evening so I would like to check out around 7:15 PM so that we can catch our flight on time.
Furthermore, I would really appreciate if you could arrange the sea-facing two rooms for our stay. Could you please send an email to me mentioning the details of the room tariff for the aforementioned schedule? Also, your website states that you have a spa, gym, and open swimming pool. I would like to know more about available fun activities for children and elders as well. I would really interested to visit nearby famous tourist places, thus, I request you to please arrange the list of such places.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Deepak Sharma
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...wo rooms for our stay. Could you please send an email to me mentioning the details of the roo...
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Line 7, column 507, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...please arrange the list of such places. I look forward to hearing from you at th...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...range the list of such places. I look forward to hearing from you at the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, really, so, therefore, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60368663594 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46471844452 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622119815668 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0456019882 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8181818182 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221251575174 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815259532975 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383816163315 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119953513359 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415733895696 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.