Nowadays, people have developed poor eating habits and do not eat a balanced diet.
What are the reasons behind this? Suggest possible solutions to control this.
In this modern era, exercise and diet are essential to maintain a healthy lifestyle. It is widely believed that health issues have been increased due to the busy life schedule and as a result, fewer people care about eating habits. I personally believed that people’s busy schedules and they often avoid exercise are the two major reasons for this problem. Fortunately, although, these issues led to developing a poor healthy lifestyle, there are ways to tackle the issue.
To commence with, there are many factors for poor eating habits among individuals. One possible reason is that life has become busy nowadays. Thus, people do not cook food at home and prefer to eat a meal at restaurants or order food online. For example, many startups have been launched during recent years to deliver the meal at your doorstep.
On the other hand, adequate solutions are also available to tackle the problem of poor eating habits among people. One such effective solution can be implemented by the government by creating awareness about a healthy lifestyle. Apart from this, individuals can take responsibility to encourage family members to eat only home-cooked healthier food. Moreover, people should consider doing a workout in their daily life to stay fit. For example, although some people do not prefer to join the gym, doing only one hour's walk in the nearby park led to good fitness among people.
To sum up, eating unhealthier food is a serious concern of society these days and led to unhealthier life. However, people can make the necessary changes in their daily life to avoid eating unbalanced diets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, apart from, for example, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05617977528 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57833547628 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8648201392 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295944604025 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920167560936 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391870387432 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165790705879 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392250272384 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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