You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:• Introduce yourself. -• Explain that you did not b

Essay topics:

You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.

Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:

• Introduce yourself. -

• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.

• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Deepak Sharma and I have been a loyal customer of your bank for 10 years. I hold ICICI Bank platinum credit card and savingss account as well. I am writing to enquire about recently received credit card statement on my email address.

To clarify, according to the statement, I spent $50 on purchase of wristwatch from snapdeal.com using the PayPal and I am totally unaware of this transaction. I did not place any online order recently. Moreover, I do not have either PayPal or snap deal account. Therefore, I believe the credit card statement generated incorrectly.

Furthermore, I would like you to investigate further in this regard and send the correct credit card statement. To avoid any confusion, you may issue a new credit card. I hope you will address my issue at earliest. To discuss further, we can arrange a meeting at my office.

I look forward to hearing a positive response from you.

Yours faithfully,

Deepak Sharma

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dit card statement on my email address. To clarify, according to the statement, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97590361446 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79453149918 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674698795181 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1278677446 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5384615385 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7692307692 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316526701835 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980114779641 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559812787223 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170304369216 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253531051733 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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