You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know
when you will be arriving and leaving,
what type of rooms you would like
and ask them how much the weekend will cost
also inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to book my family’s upcoming vacation at your seaside hotel The Lazyboy, in Panjim, Goa.
We have heard a lot about your resort and it seemed the perfect place to go this long weekend. There will be four of us and we are planning to arrive on the 27th April, and will stay till the 30th. Since your sea view cottages have an exquisite view we would like to book one of those. Can you furnish me with the booking cost after applying the 20% off-season discount mentioned on your website please?
Since we also like to explore the local area wherever we go, can you direct your travel desk to send us an itinerary of the nearby tourist attractions and local markets? Since this is the first time we will be coming to Goa and are not really aware of the roads, we would also like to book one of your cabs to take us around the area.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Arjun Karwa
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...7th April, and will stay till the 30th. Since your sea view cottages have an exquisit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46892655367 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19827016396 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638418079096 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4679374211 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211684256082 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830436349739 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414374090468 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120121758978 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575269262793 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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