You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter.
- give details of the job
- explain why it is important to you
- suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Dear Mr. Khan,
I am writing this letter in regard to my recent job application at Google for which I would like to request you to act as a reference. My interview is in the coming week and I would be really grateful if you could send a letter of reference on my behalf to the company.
In relation to the specifics, the post that I have applied for is Regional Client Manager in their advertising team. Handling clients has been my area of expertise so far and I have managed a diverse range of clients representing different products in the last 7 years.
As you may remeber, even while in college, I was always fascinated by Google. I really admire the company culture, they way they foster talent, and treat their employees. The growth of the company in the past two decades is proof of that and this is why it has always been a dream of mine to work for them.
I would be really obliged, if in the letter you could highlight a few key points such as the fact that I was responsible for bringing in a major part of the advertising revenue for the college cultural festival. Apart from this, you may mention my team management skills based on managing the projects in your department. Since they are also looking for someone with a sales and managerial background, including this information would really improve my chances.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours sincerely,
Arjun Menon
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ving your response. Yours sincerely, Arjun Menon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, really, so, while, apart from, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66135458167 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62847378954 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597609561753 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.051115723 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228982128453 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791098716271 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563473352058 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110773197289 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727536896771 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.