All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?
Since they were invented, motorised vehicles have been massive guzzlers of fossil fuels. This is why their production should be stopped and electric vehicles should replace them. I agree with the following statement because not only do electric vehicles cause zero exhaust emissions but they are also cheaper to run and maintain at the same time.
The reason why electric vehicles are called so is because they run on a rechargeable battery.Every time the battery is near depletion all that has to be done is to recharge it, just like we recharge our mobile phones. Since they don’t use fossil fuels for energy there are no engines and as a result no combustion that takes place resulting in zero emissions. This is very similar to that of a child's toy which would also run on batteries.
The running expenditure and the upkeep of motorised vehicles is also very high when compared to electric vehicles. Due to it being a limited resource the costs of petrol have only risen over the years showing no signs of stopping. Every trip to the gas station is an additional expenditure compared to the almost negligible cost of recharging a battery operated car. An engine comprises of several smaller components which may need to be serviced or changed over a period of time which involves time and cost. Since they don’t have an engine, electric vehicles also have lesser wear and tear which falls cheaper in the long run.
Hence as summarised in the above arguments, I believe that it’s only in the interest of the society at large that vehicles which run on fossil fuels should be quickly phased out and electric vehicles should take over.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, may, so, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85815602837 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49993712511 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570921985816 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1952737544 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203970137515 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748261206924 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851511349433 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137827935572 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693752048822 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.