You have a problem with your neighbour Write a letter to your neighbour In your letter Describe the problem Say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you want the neigbour to take

Essay topics:

You have a problem with your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
. Describe the problem
. Say how long it has been a problem
. Explain what action you want the neigbour to take.

Dear Ms Choudhary,

I am Arjun your next door neighbour and I am writing this letter in regard to the problems we have been facing owing to the recent construction that has started in your flat.

Going into the specifics, since the refurbishing of your house started around 15 days ago it has become increasingly difficult for us to cope with the noise and dust that all the construction creates. Also, the workers don’t follow proper timings and work till late in the night. My wife is studying for her Masters and unfortunately her study shares a wall with one of your rooms and the noise makes it impossible for her to concentrate. The workers have not covered the windows with plastic sheets as the law requires them to and the dust blows into our house throughout the day.

I urge you to look into this matter immediately. I recommend that you have a stern word with your contractor about following the housing society construction rules. If you fail to do so, I will be compelled to file a complaint with the local police station.

Yours sincerely,
Arjun Karwa

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ms Choudhary, I am Arjun your next door neighbour and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, in regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74074074074 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63453812485 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640211640212 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.822418652 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277542401445 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994963841584 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855414619869 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192196007356 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09998038139 0.0580467560999 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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