Without capital punishment, our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. What is your standpoint?
Capital punishment or the death penalty is strictest form of judgement practiced by almost all countries over the world. It’s usually given to criminals who have committed extreme acts of crime, like murder. I personally feel that it’s necessary that such a law should exist, but only if it’s carried out under extreme circumstances.
The mere presence of capital punishment is to induce fear in the minds of people about to commit a crime. But at the same time the number of such punishments given to criminals over the world hasn’t decreased over the years.
One might argue that in certain developed countries the number has decreased, but at the same time it has risen considerably in other places. A person who’s about to commit a crime might not necessary think about what will happen if they are caught. In all probability they mostly think that they are going to get away with it, as is the thought process of most criminals.
However, there might be situations when a person commit’s a horrific crime in all his senses and aware of what the percussions might be. Such a blatant disregard of the law must not be overlooked, and depending upon the severity of the situation the capital punishment should or should not be given.
Although some countries carry out capital punishments in public eye, to make the people feel they’re also a part of dispensing justice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: is the strictest
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92372881356 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64663337068 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572033898305 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.1561655267 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.636363636 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155606431624 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635102927898 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561003560459 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094914114014 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402954734697 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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