You have a problem with the neighbor Write a letter to your neighbor In your Letter Describe the problem Say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you want the neighbor to take

Essay topics:

You have a problem with the neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your Letter:
 Describe the problem
 Say how long it has been a problem
 Explain what action you want the neighbor to take.

Dear Ms. Smith,

I hope so you are enjoying radiant health and good spirit. We have been neighbors for 15 years and have a cordial relationship with you. But, because of the rising population of vehicles, our family is facing the parking space problem.

We have been facing a problem in parking our car in front of our house in which space is allotted to us by society. This problem is faced by us for last 3 months. We know that your family has bought a new car which you usually park in our parking space. As We have different office timings so you leave your office early and you arrive home early so you get a chance to park in my parking space but I arrive late from the office I have to park my car outside of the society because of no parking space.

I request you to park your car inside your house as you have ample space inside the house for a parking car as well as you also park one of you in front of your house.

I would be thankful for considering my request.

Yours sincerely,
James

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27461139896 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18169787834 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502590673575 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7850300629 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235217227494 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103423129059 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641476191003 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142584733216 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883664415863 0.0580467560999 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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