You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
give details of the job
explain why it is important to you
suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Dear Mr. Sandip,
Hope you are doing great! I am one of your “Masters in Data Science“ batch student, Aparna. I am writing this letter to request a favour from you.
I am glad to inform you that I have been selected to apply in one of the reputed companies as a Data Scientist and hence in need of a letter of reference from you.
I had been searching for an appropriate job since I obtained my master’s degree. After a lot of struggle I finally could find an employment offer for the role of a Data Scientist. The Job location is easily reachable and it has all the cutting-edge technologies I was seeking for. If I get selected, I will be working on machine learning and neural networks. Therefore, this job is crucial for me to pursue my career in the artificial engineering field.
It would be really appreciable if you could provide a letter of recommendation which includes my strengths and the projects I worked on. Could you please add my period of degree education, my overall attitude towards projects and relationship with other fellow members. This would definitely improve my chances of getting selected for the job.
Yours sincerely,
Aparna K.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s letter to request a favour from you. I am glad to inform you that I have been ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d of a letter of reference from you. I had been searching for an appropriate j...
^
Line 6, column 93, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun struggle seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of struggles'.
Suggestion: a lot of struggles
...obtained my master's degree. After a lot of struggle I finally could find an employment offe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, really, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82352941176 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97590606649 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637254901961 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0146575099 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224389600843 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791900634024 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544465025598 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134760331962 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470581224584 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.