You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
- give details about the job
- why it is important to you
- suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Dear Sir/Madam
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to ask a favor from you. I am in the last semester of my degree of Bachelors in Chemical Engineering from National University of Sciences and Technology.
This is the peak time for applying for job have been applying in most of the fertilizer industries, as they are my interest area and my final year project was also from a fertilizer industry that will add to my curriculum vitae. There are openings in many companies for fresh graduates under the program of graduate trainee engineers; which is a very good initiative by the government that restricts all companies to induct new engineers providing them with a good chance to gain practical experience.
As you know about my passion for chemical engineering and practical knowledge, you will understand the importance of getting a job for me. This is also important to me as I want to do Masters of chemical Engineering and want to do so on my own expense.
Most of the job applications require a reference letter from a teacher or a trainer. I will be really grateful to you if you can write a reference letter for me explaining my character traits and strengths along with my passion for chemical engineering. You may refer to the Science Research project I did with you and write about my dedication and hard work.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Aqsa Afzal
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g this letter to ask a favor from you. I am in the last semester of my degree of...
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Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is is the peak time for applying for job have been applying in most of the fertil...
^^
Line 13, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a job for me. This is also important to me as I want to do Masters of chemical E...
^^
Line 19, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ation and hard work. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Aq...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86234817814 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82886751823 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558704453441 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.942709635 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.083333333 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266859307003 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112804409975 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786799572174 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141447329584 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769262759425 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.