Some governments say how many children afamily can hare in their country. They may
control the number of children someone has through taxes.
It is sometimes necessary and rightfor a government to control the population in this way.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasonsfor your answer.
In today’s ever growing and developing world some countries have restricted the number of children a family can bare. The state implies this condition via taxes. They do so in order to control the population of the country so they could live a better life and to save the worldly resources. I, however, disagree with this concept and will be supporting my opinion with reasonable arguments in the upcoming paragraphs.
Birth control in some specific countries over past few decades has resulted on lack of youth, or some specific gender. e.g in Australia the number of male child birth has decreased as compared to the ratio of females and hence creating alot of issues that they are now forced to offer facilities in order to attract men from around the world to marry Australian women. Moreover, when the country has limited it’s own population this results in a decrease in manpower and they have to import workforce eg in European countries the native people are being outnumbered by the foreigners and the outsiders have started to take hold of large companies and businesses thus affecting the economy and wealth of the country. Similarly, America has been importing doctors from Asia for a long time now.
The issues like overcrowdedness and lack of resources can be resolved by other methods. The governments can teach people to avoid excessive number of children by educating them about the changes happening in the world. If the government cannot support the whole family, it could offer the services what it can provide and rest can be imposed as the responsibility of parents and families, so that people can decide on their own about the number of children they can afford rather than the government imposing anything. Using and managing the natural resources properly and promoting the use pf renewable resources can help with the issue of resource depletion and fear of famine.
To put it in a nutshell, i pen down by saying that it is the right of every family to choose its size and it should not be taken away from them by the state in any case. Problems concerned with the over-population can be solved by making policies and managing the resources properly by the government instead of limiting the number of children a family can have.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, thus, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91688311688 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69029226245 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550649350649 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.316460877 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.214285714 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247760727907 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799730263471 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594931121292 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145902720241 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416530717373 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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