You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the manager of the Parking Management Company.
In your letter, you should tell:
• why you ride a bicycle to work
• what the problem is with the parking
• what your suggest are.
Dear Sir /Madam
I am writing this letter with regard to a recent change in the parking space for bicycles that has become an issue for me as well as other bike riders.
I am a student who is interning at your law firm to gain some experience as well as to earn something for making an easy living. I ride a bicycle to work because I cannot afford a luxury like car at the moment and it saves me the time as well since there are low chances of getting stuck in traffic. Moreover, it keeps me physically fit and healthy.
Last week there were some changes made to the parking area and almost half of the space from bicycle parking area was allotted to the cars. There is already enough space in the building’s underground parking, that is designated for cars only, but some of the biker’s area has been given away to cars which is problematic since it already was a confined space.
Reforms should be made to increase the parking area for bicycles or at least retuning it to as much as it was before. Cycle parking could be shifted to another place like the yard at the left side of the building that is filled with excess construction material from the time of building’s construction. Or the empty plot on the backside of the firm building could be utilized for car parking providing a much larger space.
I hope you will look into this matter and amendments will be made for the convenience of the bicycle riders.
Yours truly,
Aqsa Afzal
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rn something for making an easy living. I ride a bicycle to work because I cannot...
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Line 13, column 253, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
..., that is designated for cars only, but some of the biker's area has been given away t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, well, as to, at least, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62030075188 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52793762835 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0488275915 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.727272727 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176752733818 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652744722769 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396894420203 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934191348157 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276336314255 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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