Nowadays most people are not fit and active enough, compared to the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.
Majority of population in today’s modern world is more active technically then physically. Health issues are arising at much higher rate as compared to previous decades. People are becoming less active and involved in outdoor activities and are getting lethargic. Indoor games and substitutes are becoming more popular in this generation of modern era.
Technology, no doubt, beneficial and miraculous has some negative effects like making people dependent upon machines not just for most of their work and but also entertainment. Mobile phones and computers have reduced the distances and people prefer to communicate and talk visually rather the travelling and going out. Instead of ground sports, online and offline games are preferred. New gadgets being introduced are attracting people and thus making them prone to physical games. Advancement in medical technology and new medicines have made it easy for people to cure illness and hence they become lazy, gaining fitness by taking pills and drugs rather than doing something involving movement of their body.
People should be provided platforms awareness about the consequences of this idle routine and practical platforms should be provided. Facilities should be provided to engage public physically in outdoor activities and improvision of fitness checkups must be done to promote the concept of healthy and active body. Sports competitions can be organized encouraging people to compete and participate attaining the goal of healthy lifestyle. Improvisions should be made to avoid unnecessary medical treatments for the problems that could be cured by physical treatment like exercises and physiotherapy.
To put it in a nutshell, people should be educated about the necessity of physical activities and introduced to the principle fact that a healthy body has a healthy mind. Exercise and sports should be held regularly at all levels from school to offices and people should be encouraged to avail these opportunities for better and fit life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, thus, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51612903226 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85868339619 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606451612903 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1655719425 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13883437799 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490122233236 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315275503351 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865690835886 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019087298949 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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