Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past.
What are the main causes of this situation?
Suggest some possible solutions.
When compared to past people these days are less fit and active, this is for a variety of reasons, but, fortunately, there are ways we can deal with this problem.
In my opinion, the main reason for today’s people being less active and fit is because of their high dependency on modern-day technology. It has made peoples life much easier than ever. Consider the daily activities of a person in the past, they used to walk longer and did their daily jobs manually. People in this century depends mostly on vehicles to travel, then there are lifts and escalators instead of staircase which reduced people’s daily walking. Usage of various machines like washing machine, vacuum cleaner, dishwasher and so on has reduced household jobs.
Furthermore, brain activity has also considerably reduced when compared to the past generation. The activities which involved memory, for example, remembering the telephone numbers, grocery bills or important dates, are now fed into the gadgets, like laptops, notepads or smartphones. All adds up to an unfit and inactive generation.
Fortunately, there are things that can be done to solve some of these problems if they want. People can choose to walk and use the stairs more often. They can use a bicycle when travelling shorter distances or walk to their grocer, this will surely increase people’s daily activity. People also can add daily exercise into their routine which will ensure that they are physically active. In addition to this incorporating outdoor games, social involvements and memory games in life will bring considerable change in people’s life. These things need a change in one’s daily life in some big way, but they can lead to a healthier and energetic generation.
To conclude, there are lots of modern-day technologies which makes life easier which reduces daily activities. However, people can choose to live in good health and active by changing their lifestyle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28662420382 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77520864689 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582802547771 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3044192203 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6470588235 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183176798943 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607565200633 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473797100327 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101820003972 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664135364922 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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