You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:say where you think you left the papers.explain why they are so impor

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

In your letter:

say where you think you left the papers.

explain why they are so important.

tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to let you know that I had left my important document there. I would like to request you to get those documents and keep it safe with you. I will collect it from you soon.

Let me explain, on 3rd October, I stayed at your hotel, room number 203. I clearly remember keeping it in the locker inside the cupboard before going to bed. Next morning, I woke up late and, in that hurry, unfortunately, I forgot to take the folder from the locker.

The folder consists of my graduation certificate, mark list and transcript. I came to Mangalore to get it attested from the university chancellor. These documents are highly important to me.

You will find the documents in the locker. Please take it from there and keep it with you. I will come and collect it tomorrow. My contact number is 224534564.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

Dana

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...se documents and keep it safe with you. I will collect it from you soon. Let...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75471698113 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60094641883 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9310159351 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.0 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3571428571 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275840404133 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869911839818 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923840916888 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15189539578 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112122342301 0.0580467560999 193% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.09 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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