You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
- Give details of the job
- Explain why it is important to you
- Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Dear Mr Hampson,
I am Muller Fortner, one of your research assistants and lucky students, whom you have bestowed your blessing, wisdom and guidance during my academic years at the MIU University. Today, I am writing to ask a favour from you- to write a reference letter for me that I would require to submit to a prospective employer.
I have been one of your most ardent students and we have finished several projects together including the 'Impact of Western attitude to developing countries' which was published in 'The Social Affair' magazine. After I have completed my post-graduation in Social Science from MIU University in December 2018, I have been trying to start a job and recently I have been invited to an interview as a researcher at Social Hub, an international company who works for social welfare in many countries.
I applied for the job because it would enable me to closely work with other talented researchers and let me contribute to great social causes. I hope you would be happy if I get the job and continue doing the things you always wanted me to do.
I hope you would be kind enough to write a reference letter for me mentioning how you know me, my strength, academic performance and how I might be suitable for a research-based job.
Thank you in advance. I look forward to getting your reply soon.
Respectfully yours,
Muller Fortner
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'submitting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: submitting
...ence letter for me that I would require to submit to a prospective employer. I have be...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e things you always wanted me to do. I hope you would be kind enough to write ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83544303797 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84631605248 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599156118143 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.2987699784 44.8134815571 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235794732367 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951516375732 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710595367553 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143053730702 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686775685598 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.