You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :Give detail of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

Essay topics:

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.

Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :

Give detail of the job

Explain why it is important to you

Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

Hi Madam,

I am writing this letter, to inform you that I have got a job in one of the companies I dreamt of and the company is looking for a reference letter from your side.

I will be working as a Project Manager officer in Infosys Chandigarh, wherein I will be taking care of the project management activities along with the higher management.

This job plays a vital role in my career as I can fully utilize my computer knowledge, my problem-solving skills, my analytical skills.
On top of it, I can utilize my communication skill to a full extent as I need to draft emails to the stakeholders to finalize the project management deals. It will help me in the long term as I can utilize my potential to full extent.

I would request you to share your complete details in the reference letter which you will be receiving from my company, along with your name, designation, and phone number. Also, do let them know the areas in which I am expert and have done specialization.

Requesting you to please look into it at the earliest and provide the letter of reference.

Thanks and Regards,
Vandana Mankotia

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69346733668 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84573001863 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582914572864 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9392619833 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.777777778 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207735670627 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811118324173 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105531940528 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115316234627 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107659640841 0.0580467560999 185% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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