You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.In your letter explain:Why you are writing to himWhy you cannot pay the rentWhen you will pay the rent.Write at least 150

Essay topics:

You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.

In your letter explain:

Why you are writing to him
Why you cannot pay the rent
When you will pay the rent.

Write at least 150 words

Answer :

Dear Mr John,
I ,Sam, who is living on rent at your home ,need a favour from you as it is not possible for me to pay rent on time. firstly of all I want to explain you the reason behind it. You have heard about the financial crises faced by Amula Venture and company decided to shut down its operation in our city. All employees have given only half of their salaries . With that little amount of money someone can either pay rent or pay for food. I have already searched and joined new company. Even on my request they are ready to pay me in advance. According to company procedure, they could pay me after fifteen of this month and I will pay the whole amount to you at 16th of this month. I had already described you situation I am going through. I hope you cooperate. Still if you need to ask than let me know.
Your sincerely, Sam

You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.

In your letter explain:

Why you are writing to him
Why you cannot pay the rent
When you will pay the rent.

Write at least 150 words

You do NOT need to write any addresses

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear……..,

Answer :

Dear Mr John, I ,Sam, who is living on rent at your home ,need a favour from you as it is not possible for me to pay rent on time. firstly of all I want to explain you the reason behind it. You have heard about the financial crises faced by Amula Venture and company decided to shut down its operation in our city. All employees have given only half of their salaries . With that little amount of money someone can either pay rent or pay for food. I have already searched and joined new company. Even on my request they are ready to pay me in advance. According to company procedure, they could pay me after fifteen of this month and I will pay the whole amount to you at 16th of this month. I had already described you situation I am going through. I hope you cooperate. Still if you need to ask than let me know. Your sincerely, Sam

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 7, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... Begin your letter as follows: Dear…….., Answer : Dear Mr John, I ,Sam, w...
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Line 19, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...Dear…….., Answer : Dear Mr John, I ,Sam, who is living on rent at your home ...
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Line 19, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...,Sam, who is living on rent at your home ,need a favour from you as it is not poss...
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Line 19, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...ot possible for me to pay rent on time. firstly of all I want to explain you the reason...
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Line 19, column 368, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s have given only half of their salaries . With that little amount of money someon...
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Line 19, column 773, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...am going through. I hope you cooperate. Still if you need to ask than let me know. Yo...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, still, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38157894737 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24088576195 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600877192982 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1463400568 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.693843868519 0.216113520407 321% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230985913404 0.0766984524023 301% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.220450492021 0.0603063233224 366% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.362479981721 0.12726935374 285% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188220283527 0.0580467560999 324% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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