You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Sara,
I hope this letter finds you in good health and spirit .It has been a long time since we met.I am writing this letter to let you know that I have recently changed my job and I really like it.
As you know,I was working with a government organization from last six months.Professional exposure was rudimentary over there.Moreover,work environment was also not healthy.Secondly ,I was working out of my core domain which is also the main reason behind this decision.
My current company is among the top four giant multinationals.I must say that it is amazing place to work in,with lucrative remuneration, roboust infrastructure and friendly environment.
Furthermore,it has presence in all the geographic areas of the world .It has plethora of projects from North America,Europe which operates with offshore and onshore model.There are certainly good chances of travel to abroad which will be filling my aspirations of working outside India.
I look forward to knowing what are you doing these days.Please write me back at your convenience.
Warm Regards
Navdeep
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33526011561 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40757205774 2.54303337028 134% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.739884393064 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.3767756041 44.8134815571 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.833333333 76.5299724578 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 16.8248392259 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 4.34317383033 280% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164755033323 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075597041974 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829520724361 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919539472972 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846969820085 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 8.37731958763 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 70.7449484536 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 8.71597938144 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 8.15463917526 233% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.