You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a freind who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this freind. In your letter
give details of your study plan
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Ben,
I hope this letter find you in the best of your health and happiness. I am coming to Toronto on 21st September 2017 since I have successfully got a place in one of the courses in Humber college. I would be thankful to you, If you can look out for some part time job within a distance of 5-10 miles from my college.
Firstly, I know you would be thrilled and excited to hear that I been shortlisted for a one year course in information technology at Humber's College. It is going to be full time course while classes will start from 9.30 am till 5 pm. I am also going to complete a workshop related to my studies which can help me to get a high academic score.
Secondly, living expenses are a bit too on high side and it would be great if you can help me in locating a part time job. As this will help me to accommodate my cost of living and can save me some money as well.
Thirdly, If you can disseminate my part-time job requirement in your friend's circle, social networking website and other local groups, I am sure It would increase my chances of getting a job very easily in your country.
Many Thanks
Faizal
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n one of the courses in Humber college. I would be thankful to you, If you can lo...
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Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ul to you, If you can look out for some part time job within a distance of 5-10 miles fro...
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Line 6, column 169, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...y at Humbers College. It is going to be full time course while classes will start from 9....
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Line 8, column 109, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... great if you can help me in locating a part time job. As this will help me to accommodat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2962962963 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44815935449 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9166638274 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313985057713 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122406737465 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971779701913 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203053147006 0.12726935374 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574754770927 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.