You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
Say where you are going
Describe your house
Explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house
Dear Debbie,
Hope you are doing well.
Thanks again for helping to look after my house in August while I’m away. I really appreciate it.
As I mentioned to you I’m going to France for a vacation. I’ll be getting the ferry over to northern France where I’ll spend a few days, and then I’m heading to Paris for the rest of the trip. I’ll be staying with some friends there in the city most of the time. I’ll be online and will have my phone so you can contact me any time.
My house is fairly small so it shouldn’t be a problem to look after it. There’s an open plan kitchen/living room downstairs and then a couple of bedrooms upstairs. You can sleep in the spare bedroom, which is at the top of the stairs on the right. There’s also a small garden which you can sit out in when it’s sunny.
The only things I’d like you do to are to make sure you put the bins out on Friday night of the second week as they are collected Sunday afternoon. Also, if you could water all the plants once a week it would be great. If you go out, please set the alarm as there have been burglaries in the area recently .
Anyway, must get off now. I’ll give you a phone call a few days before I leave.
Bye for now
Aimee
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 289, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nds there in the city most of the time. I'll be online and will have my phone so ...
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Line 11, column 311, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ave been burglaries in the area recently . Anyway, must get off now. I'll...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, look, really, second, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4388185654 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3979783402 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.972115306 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.8823529412 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9411764706 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207744979167 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735118584509 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459159275726 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117996503566 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031263426855 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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