You are going on to a month-long training programme in the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events’ organizer.
Write a letter to the Training Organizer. In your letter:
• express your interest in the role
• request for more information about it
• explain what experience you have
Write at least 150 words
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am thrilled to be selected in a month training program with regard the protection of animal species which is hosted by your company in London. I have come to know from your email that the course head wants a volunteer to work as a social events’ organizer.
I am keen interesting to do a volunteer in social event program. I collected as much as possible data regarding all participants and location.
I would, therefore, like to know more details about this. In this case, how many programmers are run by your company? Is your company provides accommodation to spectators? Along with this, I would like to know do I have to fill application form to apply as a social events’ organizer.
My trainee number is SA0002. You might read my profile before selecting me as an organizer. I like to know that I worked in numerous social events as a volunteer since my college time. Moreover, I was awarded by many times for this work.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Amanpreet
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... as a social events' organizer. I am keen interesting to do a volunteer i...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...do a volunteer in social event program. I collected as much as possible data rega...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...arding all participants and location. I would, therefore, like to know more det...
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Line 15, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from you. Yours sincerely, Amanpreet
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80446927374 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86332333442 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631284916201 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2312821072 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4285714286 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7857142857 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338614801415 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987722476487 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728471180753 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153780152745 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984147448205 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.