You are going on a month training pragramme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social oragniser.
write a letter to the training Organiser.
expressing your interest in the role
requesting more information about it
explaining what experience you have
Dear Sir,
I am writing to enquire about information regarding training course which is being held from June to July at the United Kingdom and I come to know that department requires social event organizer for the group.
As I am one of the trainees to attend this event so, I would like to manifest my interest to become social organizer head for this event. In doing so, I need bit more details about the size and background of the group such as facilities, stuffs to be provided and total budget of the venue. From the notice displayed about schedule it seems that students will be free for three evenings in the week and after 1.00 p.m. on Saturdays at the weekends.
To arrange this event I have got two years of experience of this role as most of the times this opportunity has been offered to me. We will provide short trips, night-outs, group competition etc. This is a role that I absolutely love. Please drop me a mail if you require any further information.
I look forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Ravinder
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| 2021-02-23 | Ravindersidhu | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63783783784 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50214809102 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67027027027 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6745632101 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157804417881 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498089655015 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474566188307 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884832529834 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453544813726 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.