You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events organiser.
write a letter to the training Organiser.
expressing your intrest in the role.
requesting more information about it.
explaining what experience you have.
Dear Mr Victor,
I am excited to be a participant in the environment and disaster management training programme that you are organizing next month in London. I have always wanted to enhance my skills on that and this is an excellent opportunity for me to do so. I checked from a follow-up email that you are looking for volunteers for a social event and I offered myself for the role.
Since my college days I have been involved in many voluntary works and have extensive experience in organizing such events. In my office, I am often responsible for plan important events, coordinate with the event management team, facilitate the guest lecturers and ensure conducting successful meetings. I enjoy playing such roles, and I am quite confident I would be the right person for your social event as well.
I would, therefore, request you to send me more details regarding the training session and your plan for it so that I can start contributing right away. My participant ID is SEL-087 and you can check my profile before selecting me as an organizer.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Thanks in advance.
Yours sincerely,
David Frank
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... excellent opportunity for me to do so. I checked from a follow-up email that you...
^
Line 9, column 47, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thanks
...ooking forward to hearing from you soon.Thanks in advance. Yours sincerely, Dav...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aring from you soon.Thanks in advance. Yours sincerely, David Frank
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92385786802 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86345713085 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609137055838 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2952716033 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180686480521 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709760328388 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637523235704 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100451807718 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510613362941 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.