Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to show my interest in volunteering for the social events organizer. As I will be a part of the month long sales training program in the UK next month, I would love to take this opportunity and assist you in organizing social events.
Let me explain my experience in this field, I have been a participant and in the organizing committee of all my college events and festivals. In office I am a part of the fun at work committee and we organize month end celebrations and office outings.
I would like to understand more about this role and what activities do you have in mind. The group has three weekends in this program and we can organize some outdoor events as well as some activities during the training program. If you would be so kind to write back with some details we can jump start on this immediately.
Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Mustafa Rassawala
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'events'' or 'event's'?
Suggestion: events'; event's
...interest in volunteering for the social events organizer. As I will be a part of the m...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h end celebrations and office outings. I would like to understand more about th...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65868263473 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6780462255 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604790419162 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6140408403 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4444444444 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266041043679 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098467202069 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620007271029 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141071786414 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977684815058 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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