Online shopping has certainly led to a shift in the consumer buying behavior. But the day online shopping will completely hijack the traditional shopping experience is far off. Hence, this essay will disagree that the increase in online shopping will lead to the shutting of all shops in towns and cities and discuss two reasons for it.
Inadvertently, a lot of people nowadays prefer purchasing through the various shopping apps that are available. However, there are still some who prefer to buy things the traditional way, that is, through the neighborhood stores. Buying through online websites does not entail the personal interaction and experience that the physical stores offer. Many of these shop owners have painstakingly cultivated a relationship with their customers, this warmth is essentially missing from the online shopping exercise. For example, the mom and pop shop owners are familiar with the neighborhood .
Secondly, a section of consumers want to have a tactile observation of the products before making a buying decision. When purchasing in a small shop, the person makes an informed decision after thoroughly examining the item. This gives an assurance to the buyer that he is paying for what he has bought and he will not get cheated which usually happens in the case of online shopping. For example, online shopping is famous for duping by selling fake products or their products do not match the description in 30% of the cases, confirms a survey done by Harvard Business Review magazine.
To conclude, even though online shopping has grown and will continue to grow, there is enough scope and demand for the shops in the small towns and cities to grow and prosper. This essay discussed that one on one interaction and reliable buying experience are the major reasons due to which offline shops will continue to thrive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: mom-and-pop
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13201320132 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67514715662 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551155115512 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3282231319 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.071428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376744293636 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131229693525 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114498452544 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249636943917 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141321705789 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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