You are having some unpleasant issues at work. Write a letter to your friend who does the same job as you in a different company and say:
Describe your job.
Describe the issues that you have.
Ask your friend for some advice.
Dear John,
Hope this letter finds you in a good health. I am seeking some assistance related to a revenue management software and I believe you are correct medium to help me in this issue as you have work experience in this field,
Currently I am employed as reservation manager in CBC hotel, where my job profile was related to handle team of ten members and handling real time challenges.
But recently our organization has installed STR software though which we could know the competitive pricing and budget of different of hotel. I attended the training session, but it was more theoretical seminar than practical and couldn’t get enough knowledge about the software.
As you had completed their certification course and were working in training department for a longer time, would you be able to impart basic knowledge of that software, as it is one of the important tools to run the operation.
Let me know when you will be calling so that I will manage my schedule accordingly and thanking you in advance.
Regards,
Tim
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92613636364 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8366729781 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698863636364 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.1383284268 44.8134815571 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.5 76.5299724578 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 16.8248392259 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195814192392 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701044950323 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594067256852 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945120349515 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739707025134 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 8.37731958763 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.