Nowadays many people choose readymade food and refuse to cook at home Why do you think it happens What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice

Essay topics:

Nowadays many people choose readymade food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

It is true that most of the people are dependent on ready made food as opposed to cooking at home. There are various reasons why people prefer ready to eat meals, but they should also be aware of pros and cons of packed food.

There are several reasons why people prefer ready made food. Firstly, due to work schedule, most of the people have time constraints, so they are mostly dependent on fast food which is easily available. Secondly, by using ready to cook food packets, the meal gets ready within few minutes and people don't have to buy different ingredients from the market for preparaing food at home. Lastly, charges incurred in readymade food is less than food made at home.

On the other hand, there are positive and negative effects. While fast food is easily available, but consuming on daily basis could have adverse effect on health. People could suffer from obesity or severe health diseases. For example, in recent survey, government has published report in which around 60% population is suffering from health diseases. Readymade food includes preservatives to increase shelf life of meal. As there are many additives used in the food, it could be harmful to some people, those who are allergic to them. Food cooked at home is prepared according to the choice and need of family members.

To conclude, readymade food could be delicious but could be harmful to the people's health.

Votes
Average: 4.3 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ets ready within few minutes and people dont have to buy different ingredients from ...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...e delicious but could be harmful to the peoples health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, for example, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89121338912 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37310431634 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569037656904 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5200326341 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246438729473 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097941782671 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070449376546 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160366699831 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443742548091 0.056905535591 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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