We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is no doubt that usage of computers has increased nowadays then during the past days. Although there are advantages of using personal computers to perform work at a faster rate there are also some drawbacks associated with it. In this essay, I will discuss pros and cons and support my view with examples.
Firstly, PC are used in many organizations to complete the tasks rapidly and with the help of internet, the person can be connected to different parts of the world. For example, people can attend the meetings through Skype and don’t have to travel from one place to another. Secondly, as the world is getting digitalized, computers play a major role towards the same. Lastly, Many IT industries are coding the machines to make daily chores more comfortable. For example, there are robots who perform household tasks within few minutes after getting a command.
On the flip side, computers have started replacing humans at their work place. For example, in some industries tasks are performed by machineries with the help of computer software and less human activities are involved in it. Another factor which needs to be considered is the computers can be hacked by someone, where one might lose their personal or professional data to the hackers which might lead to bankruptcy.
To sum up, there are advantages and disadvantages of using computer and human should not be so much dependent on the same that it might replace them. In future computers can be used as a kiosk machine for food outlets or they might replace drivers and the vehicle would be driven to the destination by giving few commands.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sed nowadays then during the past days. Although there are advantages of using personal ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, for example, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95620437956 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62465350283 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0708581059 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.461538462 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182854865535 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602174751205 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588024895177 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115909645267 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749169014055 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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