The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home to work, shopping and education.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it has been observed that, most of the people are stucked during peak hours due to traffic congestion. The most viable solution to minimize traffic is to carry work from home , online shopping or teaching children through internet. I completely disagree with this statement and will propose my points in the following essay.
Firstly, most of the people would not be able to complete their job task from home and they need to be present on site to finish it. For example, there are workers who are employed in the factories or the doctors and people from hotel industry, who need to complete the assignment or be present and handle the customers face to face without being available digitally.
Secondly, online shopping could be an best possible option to avoid drive from residence to the shopping malls. But, the disadvantages would be that customers has to wait for a longer period of time, to get the product delivered which is ordered from online. Sometimes, the product could be an out of stock or the desired product is not available online; so people don’t have option but to travel to buy it from the nearest market. Lastly, imparting education through web portal to the students could be an unsuitable option. As, there are chances that tutor might miss to clear the doubt of the student, within batch of 30 students and the students might also get obese for sitting in a longer time or neglect the online class.
To truly tackle the traffic situation, Government should encourage people to use public transport and to increase its frequency to avoid traffic congestion and would also help to reduce pollution. They could also do maintenance of the road and setup traffic signals, if possible. Organizations should also allow people to work from home, to whom it is permissible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...imize traffic is to carry work from home , online shopping or teaching children th...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...assignment or be present and handle the customers face to face without being available di...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... Secondly, online shopping could be an best possible option to avoid drive fro...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... Secondly, online shopping could be an best possible option to avoid drive fro...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...that customers has to wait for a longer period of time, to get the product delivered which is ...
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Line 5, column 571, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'miss clearing'.
Suggestion: miss clearing
... As, there are chances that tutor might miss to clear the doubt of the student, within batch ...
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Line 7, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k from home, to whom it is permissible.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93137254902 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5528857489 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565359477124 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0329029241 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.076923077 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206371632413 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730105943913 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430462747911 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123261052107 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361455683987 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.