You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days.
Write an email to your friend,
• asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need
• saying why you need them
• making arrangements to meet
Dear John,
It’s exciting to know you’d be visiting Manchester for a few days come 7th of June. Atleast, we’d get the opportunity to share old memories after ten years of staying apart. I would like you to help get some books from my brother, Nelson who stays at Ikeja, few meters away from your house.
The first is a hymn book which I use for my choral lessons. Since I arrived Manchester, I’ve not been able to get the book from any bookshop and this has affected my singing ability. The other books are my tutorial notes which were beneficial to me when I organized summer lessons back then at the university. The books aren’t heavy and will not occupy space in your luggage.
Since you’d arrive at mid-day, I’d suggest I pick you at the airport myself so we can see a movie at the cinema before driving home. You’d get the opportunity to see the hub of the town.
See you soon.
Cheers,
Chisom
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59281437126 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27103258752 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688622754491 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2114081935 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227939568293 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889430004195 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782967294367 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141595218635 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610346523351 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.