You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise froma new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of theUniversity. In your letter,Complain about the situationSay why thi

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You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from

a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the

University. In your letter,

Complain about the situation

Say why this is a problem

And propose ways to reduce the noise

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing regarding the amount of noise coming from the new canteen which has just opened near

my University residence. Although I am pleased that we have this facility, the restaurant remains open

up to midnight each night, and as a result there is considerable talking, shouting and the sound of

motorbikes continuing until about 12.30 each night.

This causes me and my neighbours in the residence a serious problem, because at that time we are

either trying to sleep, or in some cases trying to study in our bedrooms. In both cases, the noise and

commotion disturbs us, making us tired in the mornings or affecting the progress of our studies. I am

sure you will appreciate that this is a very worrying situation for us all.

I would like to suggest that the campus authorities restrict the canteen’s opening to 11pm at the latest

on weekdays, leaving it at midnight during the weekend. I propose that we also put up some signs

reminding users to be considerate and to keep their noise to an absolute minimum. These are simple

steps which would make us all very grateful indeed.

Thank you for your attention to this important matter.

Kind Regards,

Claudia Maggioni

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...le talking, shouting and the sound of motorbikes continuing until about 12.30 each night...
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...edrooms. In both cases, the noise and commotion disturbs us, making us tired in the mor...
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...'s opening to 11pm at the latest on weekdays, leaving it at midnight during...
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...ropose that we also put up some signs reminding users to be considerate and to keep the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, as a result, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00966183575 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64569397494 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676328502415 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6212418838 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.7 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.29896907216 302% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184256353775 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606352052651 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047249141419 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584229272491 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422530602664 0.0580467560999 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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