You are looking for part-time work. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter
introduce yourself
say what skills and work experience you have
explain the sort of job you are looking for
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is John Carberry and I am a software engineer with an information technology multinational company for quite a long time in Gurgaon city, and I have been working here since 2012. I am writing to ask you for help in finding a well paid part-time job which could help me in educating my children. As I am earning well in my current job but still not able to support all education-related expenses.
I have intermediate level expertise in development of software application in Java Technology and object oriented programming language, used to create user interface application in information technology department. Apart from this, I am superior in translating English language contents into the Chinese language at a moderate speed.
However, I am looking for a temporary job as a language translator which could be helpful in bearing expenses of higher education for my children. If you could help me in finding a part-time job in language translation, I would be greatful to you. Moreover, as I am capable of doing a software engineering job, you are welcome to find a job in this stream.
I am looking forward to hearing from you in the near future time.
Yours Sincerely,
Jay Larosa
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11590832473 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599033816425 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6864699903 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258729690727 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107940910243 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828925638147 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161677089721 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971944340976 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.