You are looking for part-time work. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letterintroduce yourselfsay what skills and work experience you haveexplain the sort of job you are looking for

Essay topics:

You are looking for part-time work. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter

introduce yourself
say what skills and work experience you have
explain the sort of job you are looking for

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is John and I work as a software engineer with an information technology multinational company located in Gurgaon City, I have been working here since 2012. I am writing to ask you for help in finding a well-paid part-time job which could help me in educating my children. As I am earning well in my current job but still not able to support all education-related expenses.

I have intermediate level expertise in developing software applications such as Java Technology and object-oriented programming language, which are used to create a user interface system in the technology department. Apart from this, I am superior in translating English language contents into other languages such as the Chinese, Hindi, and Urdu at a moderate speed.

However, I am looking for a temporary job as a language translator which could be helpful in bearing expenses of higher education for my children. If you could help me with finding a part-time job in translating a language, I would be grateful to you. Moreover, as I am capable of doing a software engineering job, you are welcome to find other jobs in the technology sector, for example, analyst and software tester.

I am looking forward to hearing from you in the near future time.

Yours Sincerely,
Jay Larosa

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, apart from, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02304147465 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11601167595 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594470046083 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6474603313 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260493648461 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107241760414 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824593392428 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162408998954 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980086588816 0.0580467560999 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 8.62886597938 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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