Over time, as children grow older, the relationship they have with their parents changes.
In your opinion, what role should parents have in their adult children’s lives?
It has been argued for quite a long time that the bonding between parents and children fades by time as children grow older. These differences leads to domestic voilence and sepratism between them. In this essay, we will discuss further how parents should help their children and guide them to maintain relationships.
First role of the parents, if children are taking any decision which is not good for them then parents should stop and guide them to take right decision. By doing this, the connection between them lasts longer and healthier with great aspects. So, parents should act as a mentor and motivator after their children grow older. In financial decisions, for instance, young people face many difficulties to save money, but parents can help them by sharing their personal experience.
Other role which parents should have in their children's lives is to let their children take decisions where they are capable of doing something. By doing this, they will be more confident and independent in this advanced world. Many of us, for example, guides our children in each and every task, this will make them dependent on us and less capable of doing any task.
Last but not least, they should help their children to manage household work and taking care of grand children. This could be very helpful for their adult children when they are working full time and not getting time to handle their personal life. To exemplify, working couples with children, who works full time with multinational companies, not get much time to take care of their infants. In that case, their parents should get help them by taking care of infants.
To sum up, parents can act as mentor and motivator to their children and help them in day to day household work. Moreover, they can guide their children to take any critical decision which could be beneficial for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94603174603 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35880920203 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495238095238 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4481755997 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38695975188 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157994161468 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110428295897 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241246655997 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369431827245 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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