You are a member of a local gym. Recently, there has been a problem in the changing area. You have reported this to the staff several times, but no action was taken. Write a letter to the manager of the gym. In your letter
• describe the problem in the changing area
• explain who you reported the problem to before
• suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing this letter to complaint about an issue that I am facing in the changing area. I am member of your gym from the last six months and enjoying all amenities except the one I want you to address. This has been reported on several occasions to gym coordinator, however, no action taken yet.
To begin with, the working condition of fan is not appropriate. In summers, the weather conditions makes it throttling to change clothes over there. Now, season has been shifted from winters to summer, so it is making more suffocating to get into the changing area.
Furthermore, this drawback has been conveyed to your management plethora of times but nothing seems to work here. Mr. Thompson, from your staff informed me that maintenance will be done. Now, it is really getting on my nerves.
I would really appreciate, if you can have a look over the situation to rectify it on priority. At the same time, gym can be kept closed on weekend to fix the problem. I hope you will pay a kind attention to it.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Urvashi
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75257731959 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58996895872 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670103092784 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4788317308 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8571428571 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8571428571 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378725468206 0.216113520407 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943184489585 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692784384922 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159194166996 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997297819069 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.