You are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a sports centre that you visit. Write a letter to the manager:
• What the problem is
• How you feel about the problem
• What steps you want the manager to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am James Smith, one of the premium members of the Energy sports centre, and I am writing to make a complaint regarding the situation of changing rooms.
First and foremost, I need to appreciate it for providing personal coaches and also a full-time specialist in sports injuries, which are great blessings. I am afraid to declare, however, that there are two main conundrums. First, the plugholes in the bathroom are always blocked up with hair which is extremely irritating. Additionally, the floor of the cloakroom, where we take off and on our clothes, has been constantly slippery with some water on it. Therefore, we are in danger of falling down and hurting ourselves.
Needless to say, I have complained about these issues on two occasions. The first time I came to your receptionist, named John if I am not mistaken, and he assured me to resolve the problems. Another time was a week later when I phoned there, and again I was promised that everything would be taken care of well. Nevertheless, nothing has happened.
Therefore, for the sake of hygiene and safety of all visitors, I sincerely ask you to either create an employee timetable system or hire a part-time worker so that the mentioned areas are cleaned.
Thank you so much,
James Smith
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, well, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89090909091 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81192854617 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8581906437 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101772745762 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315165026896 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410771535324 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0444447184679 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220007190159 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.