You are planning a vacation and want your friend to go with you write a letter to your friend
*Tell him/her that why you want to take a vacation
*Tell her about your plans
* Invite your friend to go with you
Dear Paul,
Hi! how are you? I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and prosperity. It has been long time to see you. You will be glad to know that I am planning to go for vacation with you that is why I am inscribing this missive to let you know about the same.
Actually, I am going to take a short break from job as you know that I am working for time from 8 a.m. to 9 p.m. I have got exasperated with the daily schedule. Thanks, to break the monotony of life I have decided to go for vacation. Also, I have some paid leaves in this year.
What I am thinking is to go to Goa or Manali since it is too hot in our region at the this time. So we may have a sigh of relief in any of these states. what do you think? You have already visited these places. which would be better? Let me know soon and we will visit some beaches there and enjoy water sports if we go to Goa. You can also ask Preety and Navya to join us. I am sure we will have memorable time together, hope you would not miss this time to make the memories. Finally, closing the letter. Love for uncle and aunt.
I am anticipating your positive and prompt response.
Best regards
Sandy
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 5, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
Dear Paul, Hi! how are you? I hope this letter finds you i...
^^^
Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...li since it is too hot in our region at the this time. So we may have a sigh of relief i...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
... sigh of relief in any of these states. what do you think? You have already visited ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
... You have already visited these places. which would be better? Let me know soon and w...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 421, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re we will have memorable time together, hope you would not miss this time to mak...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, if, may, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 3.97021276596 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09504362397 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591489361702 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7857044099 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.1052631579 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3684210526 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251457835234 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728866047769 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703361302021 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159437487273 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919199454927 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.5 8.37731958763 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.86 8.71597938144 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 5, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
Dear Paul, Hi! how are you? I hope this letter finds you i...
^^^
Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...li since it is too hot in our region at the this time. So we may have a sigh of relief i...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
... sigh of relief in any of these states. what do you think? You have already visited ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
... You have already visited these places. which would be better? Let me know soon and w...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 421, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re we will have memorable time together, hope you would not miss this time to mak...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, if, may, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 3.97021276596 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09504362397 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591489361702 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7857044099 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.1052631579 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3684210526 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251457835234 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728866047769 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703361302021 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159437487273 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919199454927 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.5 8.37731958763 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.86 8.71597938144 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.