You are planning to visit a foreign country Write a letter to your friends and say Where and when do you plan to go What are the details of your plan Why do you want them to go with you

Essay topics:

You are planning to visit a foreign country. Write a letter to your friends and say:
- Where and when do you plan to go?
- What are the details of your plan?
- Why do you want them to go with you?

Dear Ramin,

I’m writing this letter to inform you about my trip to Turkey.

As you might know, I’m working so hard to pay back my mortgages and also to have some savings available for my children’s future. That’s why, I felt that it would be great to do something interesting to be refreshed and happy. So, I have planned to have a journey to Turkey in this summer.

I’ve written any details of my trip and wanted to share it with you. The first step would be to book a quite and lovely place to stay in advance. The second one is to purchase flight tickets because the flight’s prices are increasing rapidly. And the final step would require us to note down any attractive places we want to visit. So, you have plenty of time to think and get back to me with your amazing ideas.

I recall of many fantastic memories we had together at school and I thought that, it would be a great chance for us to reunion again and to have lots of unforgettable moments in Turkey. If you can accompany me in this adventure, I’ll be so grateful.

I hope you are safe and sound.

With regards,
Reza

Votes
Average: 9.1 (3 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56585365854 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.577789174 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619512195122 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0393086208 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199913715492 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780971292936 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646487251303 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125173842742 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439774608571 0.0580467560999 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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